I have made a golden castle in my heart
And met you there when you were no where around
You talked little, but your eyes talked more
And started our acquaintance from there
And met you there when you were no where around
You talked little, but your eyes talked more
And started our acquaintance from there
Holding hands we walked
Silent were we , though
I wanted to tell you lots
I wanted to pour my heart on you
But couldn’t say a single word
But you listened to every whisper of my heart
To every beat of my heart
You listened to every untold word
But never I knew You stole my heart ,
Between those silent conversations
Void Thoughts 
This is your first post? wow!
Silent conversations are the best, aren’t they? they convey more than words ever can!
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Vinitha, too good. Ingane oru kalakari nammude koodeyulla karyam ithuvare ariyathe poyallo.
We will have a spot for you in our get-togethers from Now on.
Ithu njan ariyunna oralepattiyanonnoru samshayam. 🙂
Keep writing
anu
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Good One Vineetha.. Nalla imagination and bhaasha undu.. Keep writing..Lekshmi
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impressive 🙂
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Wow!! its been amazing..each sentence tons a lot…
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Good One Vineetha … Keep on writing 🙂I never knew there is a poet in you .. great !!Love,Divya
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Wow!! Its such a fantastic work…Waiting to see more of these…
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