Kids gathered slowly
silence broken once and for all,
school in session!
Linking with Haiku Horizons prompt – Slow.
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Kids gathered slowly
silence broken once and for all,
school in session!
Linking with Haiku Horizons prompt – Slow.
Void Thoughts 
Nice thought, and a beautiful image. 🙂
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Thanks Payal. 🙂
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Lovely-lines. I’m sure a lot of folks involved in school rhythms would identify with it.
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Inspired! What I have als found life affirming is the sight of children rushing out of school when the final dismissal bell rings:)
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I love the picture your words evoke – the classroom filling up slowly. Nice.
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Very Nice!
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School in session – it’s something I have waited to hear from the past 1.5 weeks that my son has been home- due to the snow storm. School starts tomorrow – Yay!
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nice… 🙂
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You’ve captured it so beautifully.
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If you don’t mind some kind criticism, this is not haiku. It’s free verse put into haiku form. I don’t want to hurt your feelings but know when I started to write haiku I did the very same thing. If other poets hadn’t guided me I would still be making this mistake. I suggest you read up on haiku again it’s not an easy form to get right especially when you consider it’s from Japan and started out in a different language then we are using to write it in. Each line should contain a whole idea not spill into the next line. I love your idea though!
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Thank you for the feedback, Bekkie. I did feel that this one wasn’t up to the mark. Will definitely give my best in mastering the art of Haiku. Thanks a lot for reading and commenting. 🙂
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You are so sweet! I bet you write some great free verse! Have a good week!
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