“You look ravishing.”
“Really? You do know that we are not going to happen, don’t you Dave?”, smiled Kate teasing him.
“I know. But I wish I didn’t!” sighed Dave.
Welcome to the weekly series of Five Sentence Fiction. Every Tuesday I will write a micro-fiction in five sentences based on the prompt. The above story is written for the prompt WISH. Feel free to join me with your Five Sentence Fiction using Wish as prompt in the comments. I would love to read yours.
Somewhere it has a tint of pain.Nice.
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Thanks Sarala. 🙂
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Ah! Wish they were together! Beautifully penned Vinitha 🙂
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Thanks, Shalini. 🙂
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I wonder why they can’t be together…what’s the mystery!
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I wonder too. 🙂 Thank you for stopping by, Sanch.
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Ah, the mystery! Why couldn’t it happen? Was there something forbidden? So many questions. Well written 🙂 Good to see you blogging.
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Thank you, Shailaja. 🙂
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ha ha! That was good but why not is riding on my mind too 🙂
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thanks, Parul. 🙂
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Aah! Wish they were meant to be!! Liked the maturity of Dave. And that’s a story that speaks volumes in just 5 sentences. Kudos, Vinitha!
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Thank you, Shilpa. 🙂
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Beautiful, Vinitha. Loved your take on the prompt. Left me on a plaintive note!
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Thank you, Esha.
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Let me in the lurk vinitha… They so seem to be in love.. wondering why its not happening
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Makes me wonder too, Ramya. What else is needed besides love to be together, right? Thank you for visiting, Ramya. 🙂
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Oh, how I wish they were meant to happen! Dreamy…Vinitha! 🙂
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Glad you liked it, Shilpa. 🙂
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This Dave seems like a sorted guy.
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He does, doesn’t he? 🙂
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Cheers to Dave for knowing the truth and still not being in despair 🙂
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Good for him, right? 🙂
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Why why can’t they happen. Left me with so many questions. Wonderfully written
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Thanks, Raj! 🙂
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