“You should ask her.”, advised Harry.
“What if she says no?; I’m waiting for a sign.”, answered Toby.
“Don’t wait too long, I heard Dylan saying that he is her friend”, warned Harry.
“That’s the sign; I am going to ask her now if I can play with her.” The determined first grader ran toward his classmate.
Welcome to the weekly series of Five Sentence Fiction. Every Tuesday I will write a micro-fiction in five sentences based on the prompt. The above story is written for the prompt SIGN. Feel free to join me with your Five Sentence Fiction using Sign as prompt in the comments. I would love to read yours.
Awww…and I thought it was an adult love story about to begin! ;P
This was cuter! ❤
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Aww.. that’s such a sweet tale! Love it, Vinitha. Keep them coming 🙂
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A soulful fiction.
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Aha! What a twist! My mind wandered to luv shuv. In fact, I became friends with my bestie because he was friends with a hottie in college. Throughout our three years, he kept pulling me for that:)
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Glad you enjoyed the twist, Vishal. Haha, that must have been so fun. 🙂
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Yeah he was taunting me for whole 3 years and saying whatta selfish best friend I am.
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Damn cute n unexpected… I liked the innocence n hope that shines through it all
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Kids are such, filled with innocence and cute. My son tells me stories from his class. It’s so fun. Thank you for visiting, Shalini. 🙂
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Awww!! thats was so sweet. Was expecting something else and out of the blue , it ended on a different note!!!!
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I am happy you liked it, Ramya. Thanks a lot. 🙂
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Awwww.. That is one cute conversation for a first grader. Actually, I read it twice to confirm whether I am reading it right.
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Thank you, Suja. Glad you enjoyed the story. 🙂
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Aww! So cute. Some love stories start pretty early!!
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They do, don’t they? Thanks, Shilpa. 🙂
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That was an unexpected twist in the story. It made me laugh.
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Glad to know that it made you laugh, Anamika. 🙂 Thank you. 🙂
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Awww they are so cute… Love this story 😀😀
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Thank you, Raj. 🙂
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The ending made me laugh 🙂
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Glad to know that, Damyanti. Thank you for the visit. 🙂
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That was cute. I saw a similar scenario in my institute. The boy went and said I love you to the girl and they both are five years old. And he was blushing the whole day. 🙂
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Aww, that’s so cute. 🙂 Thanks for visiting, Sheethal.
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