Echoes of a Dream

© Vinitha Dileep


This piece is written in response to the two hundredth and eighty fourth edition of Fiction Monday inspired by the word prompt – NEW hosted by yours truly. Do join in if you have a tale to tell.

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7 thoughts on “Echoes of a Dream

  1. I was expecting a fantastical experience as the lantern flickered calling Megha on that path. The ending lines, though, threw me off the chair laughing.

    Oh! It was just a dream! What all can happen in a dream!

    I am thinking if I press the ‘send’ button on all the posts sitting in my drafts, I will surely have to look for a a similar magical path to vanish from this illusionary word.

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  2. Wow! Just what I needed to read today, Vinitha! It is so essential to push away that fear that cripples us all the time, not just in blogging I feel, but also for the multitudes of things that we do in life where we are not sure of ourselves.

    The eerie suspense and the anticipation alongside the fear and the hesitation was brought out so beautifully in the story. Fab take on the prompt, Vinitha!! Well done!

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  3. I’m glad you didn’t overthink this one and hit publish, Vinitha :-). Seriously, it is the most debilitating thing.

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  4. Overthinking sucks the fun out of every such moment that could turn into an exciting adventure, isn’t it?

    I loved how you have created the suspence, Vinitha!

    I am visiting your blog after so long, but now that we have this WA group, I am sure there will be a regularity to our writing and blog hopping.

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  5. That was wonderful. The scene you created was eerie and I also thought of the new trail that came up. The part about hitting send and overthinking reminded me of the days I use to hesitate to publish after I wrote a post. Well done on the prompt, Vinitha!

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