The captivating silhouette
Tranquilizing and Intriguing
From afar, I thought!
It never occurred to me
How empty it could be
Once I get close!
An empty silhouette
That captured my eyes
Alas, I learn a little late!
Written for Day 3 of Write Tribe Festival Of Words for the above photo prompt.
Sometimes things that captivate us are really empty on closer inspection, aren’t they? I love how you allowed this prompt to speak to you (and us) so deeply.
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Such big words, Vinitha. I am just happy that the empty silhouettes do not evoke a sad picture here. Or do they? If they do, fill them with sand and seawater. Don’t let them stay empty. Throw them in the sea and watch the waves play a catching game with them. If this pair vanishes, get another pair and repeat. No one should be sad.
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Soul stirring poetry Vinitha.
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absolutely brilliant. powerful and stirring.. and i am in awe with the words..
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Beautiful..am pinning it
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Oooh haunting. It grows on the reader every time one reads it π
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You have a way with words. You’ve captured an image and feeling so beautifully.
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I find myself at loss of words when it comes to poems. This one, I have read thrice and it’s growing on me with time.
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Thought provoking poem. Something unusual.
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Hauntingly beautiful
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Thank you very much! π
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