
She waited nervously at the bus station with her luggage. She kept glancing around for him and he was nowhere to be found.
Where is he? What if he didn’t come? Questions zoomed in her already worried mind. They have planned a future together. Both of them wanted to escape from their routine life and the dullness that surrounds it. So they decided that it’s time to take off and live according to their terms.
But where is he?
As she occupied the seat alone she thought that maybe it’s time for her to live life in her own terms after all.
100 words fiction written for Friday Fictioneers for the above picture prompt.
Loved this piece. Every teenage girl need to read this! π
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Thank you, Mithila. π
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I ma glad that she realized what she truly wanted!
Cheers
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Yes, me too. Thank you for stopping by, Geetika. π
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Now she will truly find herself!
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Yes, she will! Thank you for stopping by, Dale.:)
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She made the right decision.
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I think so too. Thank you for stopping by. π
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Great last line.
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Thank you, Ansumani. π
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Cool little tale, well done.
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We always jump to the worst conclusion. Perhaps something came up and he couldn’t genuinely make it. Why didn’t she call him?
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Good for her! No point waiting for some one who did not keep his word. Enjoyed reading Vinitha.
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She made a wise choice! No use hanging on to a wimp, is there? π
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Well, he obviously didn’t deserve her. Go ‘her’, i say!
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π Thank you for stopping by, Sid! π
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Good decision she took of moving on. Different take on the prompt.
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Yes, it is. π
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By the end of the story I was cheering “good for her!”. That story made me feel so good.
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So glad that you enjoyed my attempt, Alana. π
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Dear Vinitha,
Good for her. It sounds like she’s better off without him. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle. π
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