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“Look Mel, that minivan is still there. Why is it parked in the same spot always? I guess someone abandoned it. What do you think?”
“I think so too, Claire. You wanna go take a closer look?” said Mel walking towards the minivan.
“Its almost time for school. We won’t snoop around here for long, okay Mel?”
“Hey, What are you girls up to now?” called out Claire’s big brother Adam.
“Never mind” replied the girls running towards their school ditching their curiosity unaware of the disappointment in the red eyes looking at them through the window of the van.
Linking this to the 100 words fiction at Friday Fictioners.
Void Thoughts 
Yes abandoned vehicles have a spooky vibe.. Thank you Amy for taking time to read..
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Yup.. 🙂 Thank you for stopping by..
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Thanks yarnspinner.. 🙂
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Thank you Sun for stopping by.. Welcome to my space.. 🙂
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Thanks a lot Rochelle.. 🙂
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Thank you Subroto for taking time to read and commenting.. 🙂
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Thank you Susan… This one is different from my usual writing.. Glad you liked it.. 🙂
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Thanks Shilpa for taking time to read.. Girls are safe for now.. 🙂
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Vinitha, Welcome to Friday Fictioneers! Good scary story. Good thing they didn't get any closer to the minivan. Well written. : ) — Susan
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First rule of safety is to always avoid trucks that have red eyes peeping from it.
Nice take on the prompt and welcome to Friday Fictioneers.
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Dear Vinitha,
Welcome to Friday Fictioneers. It's a good thing for the girls that Adam came along when he did.
shalom,
Rochelle
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Good one.
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That van is possessed! [shudder!]
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An abandoned vehicle always spells trouble, especially if there are red eyes peering from within. Spooky!
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my first thought…thank goodness Adam spotted the girls and they listened!! love the cliffhanging moment, Vinitha.
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I really want to know what happens next! 🙂
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