Thoughts chained
Forever pained
Unseen barriers
Paving course
Fenced in forever
Or free, yet lost the way?
Linking with #WordlessWednesday hosted by Esha and Natasha.
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Void Thoughts 
There’s a lot of depth to the lines you’ve coined in this poem, Vinitha. I agree—nothing is more difficult than rigid thoughts and fetters that tie us to the same place, when we can easily break free and be open to experiences. The image of the fence struck me the most and the words just added more layers of meaning to it. Thank you for sharing such a deep thought and for linking up for #ww this week.
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Beautiful! The verse and the picture are just perfect together.
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Wow! Such a beautiful write! And stunning pic too! xx
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Fences and barriers are more pronounced when the eyes arent on the goals. Loved the different ways in which your words and the image can be interpreted.
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Yes, we’re often so chained to old ways of thinking and responding that it’s hard to break free.
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beautiful poem. Also the image is so interesting because only the fence is clear and everything beyond it is blurry and left to the imagination.
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Unseen barriers are usually hard to break. Wonderful write yet again 😊
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